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Song Lyrics (Folk)

Record Store
by Sherwet

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If i were to own a record store
I'd use this colour to paint the door
And play melodies that make you feel at home
after all, that's my record store

I'd let you share your day in music sheets
And never let you cry in the streets
A walk or two will do,
just don't forget what you've been through

And It will open at midnight,
for wandering souls in disguise,
and all these lying lights
Will soon tell the truth,
So, let the music in,
you won't carry your sin,
my records will carry it for you
Because they know what It feels
Like to be all blue

A walk or two will do,
just don't forget what you've been through
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First attempt write a song, any feedback is absolutely appreciated, I'm still working on my writing skills




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  • john.m.german says

    I like where you are going with the lyrics, except I would change sin to sorrows as it fits more with the word "blue"; Sin is painting more of an incorrect picture. Just my 2 cents.
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